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UNAWARE THAT THE ONE WHO PUT THEM THERE, IS ONE OF THEM

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PLOT:
 
UPON WAKING UP IN A CELLAR, FIVE CHILDHOOD FRIENDS MUST FIND THEIR WAY OUT. BUT THE ONLY THING IS, EVERYTHING IS SEALED OFF. THE WINDOWS ARE BOARDED IN, THE DOOR IS LOCKED AND THEIR IS A BULLET PROFF STEEL WALL BEYOND IT. THERE SEEMS TO BE NOTHING TO DO BUT ROT. BUT WHEN ONE OF THEM FINDS A LETTER FROM WHOEVER DID THIS AND GIVES ONE CLUE, IT'S FIGURED OUT THAT THEIR IS FOUR MAIN LETTERS. WHEN THEY FIND THESE LETTERS IN VARIOUS LOCATIONS, A POCKET, WASHER, DRYER, A HANDGUN IS FOUND. ALSO, THE LAST LETTER IS THE MORE SECRETIVE OF ALL. IT TELLS THAT THE PERSON WHO PUT THEM THERE IS ONE OF THEM.
 
RATE
5.1/10
 
FINISHED MAY 6TH, 2007
 
 

TRIVIA
 
IS ONE OF THE OLDEST STORY IDEAS I'VE HAD THAT TOOK SO LONG TO WRITE.
 
JUST LIKE MANY OF MY STORY IDEAS, THIS ONE TURNED OUT TO BE JUST A LITTLE DIFFERENT THAN IT WAS WRITTEN DOWN IN MY NOTEBOOK OF IDEAS.
 
THERE WERE ONLY FIVE CHARACTERS IN THIS, AND NO OTHER BACKGROUND CHARACTERS (NOT COUNTING HIGH SCHOOL STUDENTS FOR ONE FLASHBACK)
 
 
 
 
CHARACTERS
 
DOUG
KYLE
ARTHUR
PETER
JOHN

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